In this blog #13, I am presenting a draft of my introduction. After presenting my introduction to my group, my team make some recommendation for improving. It was found that my introduction have a hook, I mention the "three good things", my introduction end with TPS thesis statement, and the thesis statement reference that the "three good thing" work for me. However I have to give more information about the "three good thing" process. I should also write the title of each section for example, Introduction for this section. I realized that the fact that we work in the small group was really helpful and the "Informal Presentation Feedback" sheet gave by the teacher was important for the process.
Here is my first draft introduction: Can the “Three Good Things’’ gratitude process has a positive impact on my well-being? A new poll found that more 90% of American agreed that grateful people are more fulfilled, lead richer lives, and are more likely to have friends (Elianna, Jeremy Adam Smith). As advised by Martin Seligman, a positive Psychologist, I wrote down each day, everything that went well for me that day. I realized that gratitude is the most important thing in our life. “The three goods things” process have a positive impact on my well-being because it helps to be more responsible to my family, build a good relationship with friends, and meet my career goals. Here is the Informal Presentation Feedback ipf_introduction.jpg
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